The vision of this piece is, I assume, a buck teeth animal. I'm not quite certain what it's trying to portray but I do see a sense of originality coming from this piece. The technique definitely needs worked on. There are lines where there needn't be and colors do not cohere . I suggest working with the colors on your next piece. There really is no impact from this piece except from the large eyes in the center of the canvas. Work on trying to make the lines connect or make them thinner.
Still, I must say, it is done well and corrections always need to happen.